نمونه writing آیلتس با نمره 8 نوشته شده توسط دانشجویان دکتر آرین کریمی بهترین استاد آیلتس ایران

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نمونه جواب رایتینگ آیلتس تسک 2 با نمره 8 در آزمون آیلتس آکادمیک

 

 

کلاس تخصصی آیلتس دکتر آرین کریمی کلاس رایتینگ آیلتس

 

 

IELTS Writing Task 2 with Band 8 Answer Model

 

Many people believe that educational standards have declined by the teachers and the students recently. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

 

Nothing can alter the fact that in recent times, educational standards have not been taken into consideration sufficiently. This essay wishes to elaborate meticulously on several sources and viable solutions to this issue.

 

Chief among the causes is teachers’ lack of motivation which results from financial resources scarcity. It is indisputable that when teachers do not earn a good living, they lose their motivation to observe educational standards. Thus, they heed scant attention to the students’ needs and wants. Further and more importantly, though, lack of job vacancies for the students after graduation is a critical problem which has brought about dramatic demotivation; a salient example is elite engineering graduates in Iran who encounter unemployment after graduation and lose the incentive to pursue their studies.

 

Two primary solutions are remained to this problem. Firstly, The teachers who propel students toward a desirable future to fulfill their wishes as to launching a decent career, have to be provided with sufficient financial support; in so doing they will be stimulated to attempt to train students who are decent regarding educational norms. Governments in general and the science ministry in particular are responsible for this. Equally important, though, a logical thought about students future after graduation leads to effective encouragement that would make students build an iron will and expend a huge effort to graduate with the most rigorous studies in a certain field; for instance, medical students in Iran have benefited from this amenity thus far.

 

By way of conclusion, I once again restate my idea that provided that the teachers are supported financially to cover the expenses and also students have hopes to finding a job related to their field of study, not only will not the education standards decline and driven to the margin, but they will also be warranted.

 

300 words

 

نوشته شده توسط خانم س - ن از دانشجویان دکتر آرین کریمی