نمونه جواب رایتینگ آیلتس تسک 2 با نمره 7 در آزمون آیلتس آکادمیک نوشته شده توسط خانم نسیم اچ از دانشجویان دکتر آرین کریمی
IELTS Writing Task 2 with Band 7 Answer Model
In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
During the past century, we were witness of a significant improvement in the agriculture sector. Modernizing the ways of planting, processing and harvesting, using new fertilizers and pesticides have greatly contributed to increasing the quantity and quality of the agricultural products. However, these technologies have not reached everyone equally. There is still huge number of people in the world who cannot afford to meet their basic nutritional needs. The essay tries to assess the main reasons of this inequality and gives some recommendation to address this challenge.
Firstly, it is estimated that millions of people still earn less than one dollar per day and live in extreme poverty. Although significant promotions have been made in manufacturing sufficient food, people in less developed countries still suffer from starvation. In another word, only people in developed countries get benefit from advantages of this modernization. Apart from the unequal access to technologies, mismanagement of the resources is also an important factor leading to inadequate production. For instance, in my hometown, Iran despite having basic infrastructure such as fertile lands, enough sunlight and necessary agricultural equipment, the excessive and unsustainable use of water resources caused many problems for farmers in recent years.
Having mentioned the main reasons of endurance of hunger in some parts of the world, some solutions have been introduced by some experts. On the top of them are the ratification of the resolutions on millennium development goals and subsequently sustainable development goals in the United Nations. One of the main goals in the both mentioned documents is the reduction of hunger among the member states especially less developed ones. Hopefully, in 2016 the number of people suffering from the hunger was halved. This shows the firm commitment and the importance of cooperation among the states which brought fruitful results for the world’s population.
In a nutshell, hunger will not be an enduring problem in the next years if states especially developed ones fulfill their commitment to transfer necessary technology to the less developed nations and invest in their infrastructure as advised in two aforementioned global agreements.
Sample Answer written by One of Dr.Arian Karimi stuents, Mrs. Nasim H
